Saturday, November 25, 2006
This Tyme: Poetry!!!
My nice sister made me post this one! I aint a poetry person but maybe I could share this Lovely poem with u;
Secrets, secrets Lies, lies She sits in her room,
and cries and cries. There's no more trust In this girl's heart. She finally found out That life isn't perfect. She lived in dreams, As children often do. But she crawled out Into the world everyone knew. Things that once were. Happiness once known; The truth of it all To her was shown. Her little heart Will never trust again. She'll never know A real true friend. No more trust, For no more lies. She'll sit in her room And cry and cry ..........................the end...............
posted by Klara at 1:37 PM
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Hello dear Klara you writes so well
You say you're not a poet but I can tell
Your full of poems both happy and sad
If you don't share more that would be too bad
You see writing gives us wings to master the sky
And fly above those who cheat steal and lie
:-)
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Niliwanga nashindwa ka utaai post,AT LAST!!!
Ok. I feel 4 the ka-chik....but I gotta aKs is it your siz?...Coz it wuld b such a pity...and yes I concur 'th maboyzz shairi iliwanga fiti!! Oh n plizz do smthn in Swa..*heheh* >>Takin cue from you..Aiya n it Rymes!! Plizz..
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Klara...where have you been hiding?
You Kenyans are always refreshing, I love and appreciate your comments, but seems like the breeze just blows once inawhile.
I need to keep mega-track of you now :-)
Poor girl that is, Life aint no bed of roses, she need not cry over it. Tell her to move on and enjoy!!
Lovely post as ever!!
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She wakes up now,
The look in her eyes,
so sad and so lost.
Apart so dear to her now gone,
Will she ever hope again?
Ever trust again?
No she is but dead,
The walking dead.
She walks back into the world
we all call home.
Hey nice poem by the way, i tried giving it a twist of my own, but still yours jazzes me. keep writting.
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We are just like the little girl when we grow up and realise life is not as perfect as our dreams...nice poem.
Thanks for visiting gleam of dawn.
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sob sob sob.
I feel you Klara. You touched me with this one.
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@Xavier
What can I say??? Lemmi take in da pride!!!Huh!Thanks...
@ruben
Touchin is da word....
@bantuntu
Manze siwezi potea sana, Blogger world is my world....Swa ni ngumu kuandika bt will try, as long as u promise not 2 laugh @ my poor kamusi
@naijadude
Oh!Kenyans refreshin??U dont know! Bt lemmi accept da comment & say thanks..Will pass da message on..Ama??
@Don_quixote
And I thought I was apoet??Thanks for the add...
@Komi
How true!!And then I wish all I was supposed 2 do was lie down & dream and dream & dream..You Know..Thanks..
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Thats kul by your sis'
Aniwe i think betrayal is the moral of the story here and you just cant afford doing it to the young who not only are innocent but are in the process of forming their conscience.
'ish was it again!
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I hate poetry except Shakespearean sonnets.. but well, once in a while you find something imbued in simplicity. You know a poetry piece that catches you in a moment and speaks to you in that moment. guess this one does... as girly as it may be
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+the picture....I swear I'll start copyrighting my works!! How d u get my Monnet...I wish!! The painting(it is a painting?ama?) blends in...Love it!!
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na amezibeba...
betrayal in the city. maisha ni noma...ka ni sis ya you muambie eeza. bantutu aliandika ya swa (sheng), we jaribu. pia sisi tuligonga D kwa swa lakini bado tuko...
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yeah! simply klara, this is a simply lovely poem. reminds of that 'lucky' song from britney spears. is that u in e picture?
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Klara, I love your blog. Your beauty comes out in your posts. Your writing is gentle and somehow delicate, I think.
Anyway, next time it rains, go ahead - go out and dance in it, once again!
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@Dollface: Yani she's such a doll..Ooooooh....hehehehe!!
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@---Supreme-G.R.E.A.M---
Plz say that again....
@itchie geezy
It's all about Betrayal!!U got that one..
@Potash
Wow!am jumping up & down!!Bt wait..U said Girly???
@Bantutu
Wacha uwivu, I can Paint too & That doll comment..Is that u @ sweetest??? Bt am smilling!!LOL
@Modoathii
Maisha ni hivyo, betrayal kibao..I know what u are lookin for s/thg to laugh @ my swa sucks..Wacha tuachie hapo..
@Dolface
Advice taken in hard..Thanx alot...U are da man!!!
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Powerful poem!It's real. There's a time I'd have identified with it. Thankfully I don't right now. I penda the picha.
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si hiyo shairi yashika mifupa na damu...kaandike dada...kaandike
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awww.. that's such a gorgeous and touching poem.. I luv it!!! yea countryboy is right.. it does remind me of lucky by britney spears... have a great week luv and thanks for dropping by my blog... urs rocks!!!
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awww...that's sad...*tear*.
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Verry profound poem...thanks for sharing!!
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she may never find a true freind is a ladies wording..
most ladies say such words when they are dissapointed and praise everything when they are made happy....
hope you arent like that...
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Haitus eh??
is that even the spellin'!!!
You promised me Swahili...
Hibernation season's up!!
Come out, the sun is up!!
I did not intesionally repeat UP It just happened...
Toka kwa Shimo!!!
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Am back! Thanks for the comments
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That's a sad poem :-( sob, sob.
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A very nice emotional poem. Kudos gal!
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we are waitin dear....MERRY XMASS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR...........
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Hello & Seasons Greetings from down under in New Zealand. I don't know if you celebrate xmas or not in your country, but I hope you have a good day.
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Very nice poem Klara, Happy New year :)
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Lakini you and that sister of yos......
she seems to be having problems for you to solve always......
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Happy new year fellas & thanx alot...........
Hello dear Klara you writes so well
You say you're not a poet but I can tell
Your full of poems both happy and sad
If you don't share more that would be too bad
You see writing gives us wings to master the sky
And fly above those who cheat steal and lie
:-)